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Punkish Professionals

You were at your apartment, reading your schedule with glasses on while drinking a cappuccino coffee. It had 14 photoshoots straight, no gaps. It was been 2 years working with another professional model living just at the next door, He's Alfred F. Jones, a punk. At first, you had a hard time getting along with him but since he was on the next door, you became close and also because you work with him as models. You both are very popular because of you two's good look and kind to others not like the other Actors and Actresses. Three minutes left till your next photoshoot. This time it'll be on New York, you heard from Alfred that there'll be a male model you two will work with, you asked him who is it but he told you you'll meet him once you got there. That person is also a Jones. A close friend but not a relative.

"__! Let's go!" Alfred shouted behind your door.

"W-Wait!" you responded. You quickly ran at the sink to place your coffee and grabbed your red bag after that. You opened the door and found the American smiling at you. Of course, that eyeliners couldn't be forgotten, his life couldn't be completed without them.

"You look like a normal gal when at home but you totally look like a hot babe when at the set." he said with that perverted smile. You ignored him with tinted-pink cheeks and pulled him by his hand, going to his car. As always, opening the door for you like a gentleman. The backseat was full of large bags, you two will be at New York for 3 days. Yes, 3 days with those bags full of clothes. Why? Your managers won't let you look like "normal" person, a model must look like an elegant person even you're just living in an apartment.

"Al, who is this another Jones by the way?" You thought he had forgotten that you questioned him last Tuesday because you knew he have a short-term memory.

"You'll know once we get there."
Same question, same answer.

'Oh...' You furrowed your eyebrows and looked out of the window on your side.

"__, let's eat dinner tonight together!" Alfred said.

"Huh? Don't you know that I'll be having a photoshoot until 8:50 PM?" you looked back at him.

"Yeah I know."

"The restaurant at the hotel will close at 8:30PM don't it?"

"That's why I want to it with you today. I want to eat alone with you."

"It'll close..."

"No, It'll not."

"How can you say that?"

"Because I told that restaurant manager not to close until I come." He smiled a bit, feeling wanted to laugh.

'This person might did something...'

Few moments later, you two got on your destinations. There were lots of lots of fans waiting on the door, almost blocking the road. Some were holding fansigns and some were wearing T-shirts with you and Alfred's pictures printed there. The bodyguards came to block the fans to keep them away from you two. The fans squealed when Alfred went out of the car and it got louder when you came out. Even just outside of the set, there were photographers already.

"I love you Alfred!!!!"

"__ you're the best!!!!!!!"

"Ahaha... Thanks." you both said at the same time, you two noticed it and laughed at each other. While walking towards the door, a young girl who's younger than got tripped, blocking the way.

"Ouch... That hurts..." the young girl groaned in pain, she fell with her face first. You helped the girl before and Alfred do and the bodyguards to pull her harshly.

"Are you okay?" you questioned, removing the dirt at her forehead and nose.

"Y-Yes..." the girl said with a blush. For her, you look like an angel that helped her to get up.

"Next time be careful okay? A woman mustn't let her face get dirtied." you said with a smile, patting her head.

"O-Okay..." she said.
And then you both proceeded inside.
This is just like the Hot Damn series but reader-tan isn't a DJ~ but a model~!!!

Preview picture not mine :)

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:iconhinatathebloom1:
Hinatathebloom1 Featured By Owner Jul 3, 2013
interesting so far ^w^
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DarkAwesomeness2 Featured By Owner Jun 24, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Hope you don't mind me faving this~
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DaniAndTaylorTwinzCr Featured By Owner Jun 3, 2013
can i get awsome (starts rapping) :iconohyeahplz:
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vocaloidanimefan Featured By Owner May 17, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
This awesome!!! XD
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ChibiVocaloidChao Featured By Owner May 2, 2013  Student General Artist
Good but some parts I didn't understand... Sorry. But it's good!
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TheUltimateHetaku Featured By Owner Dec 14, 2012
asdfghjkl;' ohmygod.... this already looks too good x'3
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lifealwaysgoeson Featured By Owner Dec 6, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Awesomes! I love punk hetalia.
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That1AsianChick Featured By Owner Nov 19, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
X3 Hot Damn series X3
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:icontwobitrachel:
twobitRachel Featured By Owner Nov 8, 2012
DUDE! I FREAKING LOVE YOUR STORIES!!!!!!!
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aimilovesyou3221 Featured By Owner Oct 26, 2012
OMGOMG!
:iconifaintplz:
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:iconheaven-is-lonely:
heaven-is-lonely Featured By Owner Oct 25, 2012  Student General Artist
Tis is awesome...
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GamerKelly101 Featured By Owner Oct 22, 2012  Student Artist
Yaaaay! New story with Alfie! :D
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0xWhaii Featured By Owner Oct 22, 2012  Student Writer
^^
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AriannaSfytcon Featured By Owner Oct 22, 2012
I like this America better, he's hot.
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:icon0xwhaii:
0xWhaii Featured By Owner Oct 22, 2012  Student Writer
don't you like the Normal America? XD
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:iconariannasfytcon:
AriannaSfytcon Featured By Owner Oct 23, 2012
I do, I just like punk america better
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NekoNekoGirl04 Featured By Owner Oct 22, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
I like this, but there are a lot of grammar errors... I still like the concept, though. :)
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darkkawaiipanda Featured By Owner Oct 22, 2012  Student General Artist
Lots of spelling errors. I think you're messing around with past and present tense too much.
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VictoryWept Featured By Owner Oct 22, 2012  Student Digital Artist
This.....could have been good. The dialogue felt stiff, and there were too many spelling and grammar errors for me to suspend disbelief.
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:icon0xwhaii:
0xWhaii Featured By Owner Oct 22, 2012  Student Writer
I knew it ._. I shouldn't used present tenses ._.
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VictoryWept Featured By Owner Oct 23, 2012  Student Digital Artist
It has a LOT of potential... You're just mixing tenses, and point of view, and I think you got a bit confused it all....

I'm sorry, it's just I used to be an editor for a small firm, and I can't seem to really let go of that. >.<
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198329 Featured By Owner Oct 22, 2012   Writer
im always excited for your amazing stories!!!! yes! :iconamericapartyhardplz:
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MisakiAyzawa Featured By Owner Oct 22, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
i feel special... yea special...
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:icon0xwhaii:
0xWhaii Featured By Owner Oct 22, 2012  Student Writer
oui~
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MisakiAyzawa Featured By Owner Oct 22, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
lol
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0XxRavenxX0 Featured By Owner Oct 22, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
I never expect anything less than awesome from you now! XD
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0xWhaii Featured By Owner Oct 22, 2012  Student Writer
:iconmegablushplz:
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0XxRavenxX0 Featured By Owner Oct 22, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
-hugs. XD It's ok! Your awesome! It comes naturally to you!
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PerfectPunkAlchemist Featured By Owner Oct 22, 2012  Student Writer
I loved that series~ I hope that you upload the next chapter quickly!
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:icon0xwhaii:
0xWhaii Featured By Owner Oct 22, 2012  Student Writer
thanks! maybe later :3
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PerfectPunkAlchemist Featured By Owner Oct 22, 2012  Student Writer
Okay! ;)
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SharonaIsCool Featured By Owner Oct 22, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
awwwhhh~<3
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0xWhaii Featured By Owner Oct 22, 2012  Student Writer
^^
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ozwot Featured By Owner Oct 22, 2012
wow super cute ^///^
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:icon0xwhaii:
0xWhaii Featured By Owner Oct 22, 2012  Student Writer
thank you! :D
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ozwot Featured By Owner Oct 25, 2012
your welcome ^^
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Zeldapointdefer Featured By Owner Oct 22, 2012
I like the story; and all the other you made: but how do you do (sorry if it's a bad english) to have so much idea?
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:icon0xwhaii:
0xWhaii Featured By Owner Oct 22, 2012  Student Writer
thanks :)

I don't know, I just can :)
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:iconzeldapointdefer:
Zeldapointdefer Featured By Owner Oct 23, 2012
XD; sometimes when I have good idea to write a story for myself I don't know how to end it...
So I'll never become a writer!
But when I wrote something ( I've never wrote a complete story XD). My friends and my family want that I make some more...
but no ideas came...
It's the reason why I just ask...

So much writing tk said nothing...
somethimes I'm pretty strange, do I?
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:icon0xwhaii:
0xWhaii Featured By Owner Oct 23, 2012  Student Writer
true, It's hard to think how you should end it XDD but if you write and write you'll get used to it :3
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:iconzeldapointdefer:
Zeldapointdefer Featured By Owner Oct 24, 2012
Thanks, I think I'll try to make a story with a end in the holidays if I don't have too much exams.
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DemonChan22 Featured By Owner Oct 22, 2012
I like the story but the pic is like Al have been step overto Black Butler because he look like Ronald Knox in that one XD
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0xWhaii Featured By Owner Oct 22, 2012  Student Writer
:iconuguufaceplz: don't compare my America to Ronald! :iconamericaxdplz: but to be honest they do look a like O_O
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DemonChan22 Featured By Owner Oct 22, 2012
I would never do that but it was just the pic that look like him but America is cooler and a real Hero then that idiot of a grim-reaper.
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0xWhaii Featured By Owner Oct 22, 2012  Student Writer
if America dies, he'll be a grim reaper but he "saves a soul" XDDD
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