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'It's sure cold today huh?' you thought as you looked at the gray sky. Snow suddenly fell from the sky. Before going to work, you wore a red coat, it was still cold, atleast it warmed you a bit. 
You reached the almost-turning-into-ice studio. Everyone in the studio were almost turning into an ice too because the heater broke. 

"Why it suddenly broke?!" DJ Gil complained. 

"Boss! Why don't you put a bonfire?!" you teased. 

"As if I would do that" He replied. 

You felt like this was not a good time to broadcast because it's cold, everyone is probably sleeping by now. So you talked to your boss to postpone the broadcasting for now. You served them coffee as exchange for stopping the broadcasting. 

"I heard you and Alfred Jones are dating huh?" Gilbert took a sip at the coffee. 

"Eh...? For me, I wouldn't call it a date" you said as you sat beside him on the stairs. 

"Why?"

"Let's say... We're just hanging out?"

"Oh just admit it that you two are dating~"

"You're talking like Francis" 

"Francis? Francis Bonnefoy of Tectonik?"

"Woah?! You know him?"

"Yeah, we're classmates on our College days with Toni"

"You never told me about that!" 

"Because you're still a brat" he smirked. 

"No I'm not!"

"I miss those days with Frenchie, he used to be sooooo pervert and such a flirt"

"Really?! He's so cool now! I don't see him hanging around with women! Did something happened to him?"

"Maybe, he's just a simple guy on the past. I don't know why he became a punk" 

"Why don't you become a punk too? I think it would suits you more"

"No way, I'm awesome enough~"

While talking with DJ Gil, you never noticed that Midnight was coming. When your boss said you can go home now, you just remembered that you have an appointment. 

"Oh shit! I have to go now!" you quickly grabbed your bag. 

"H-Hey, what's up with the big rush?"

"I'll tell you tomorrow! See ya'!" you quickly ran outside and head to a studio. You ran as fast as your feet can lift you. You were 2 hours late. 

"Where is he...?" you panted heavily. You heard footsteps coming, you looked at your back and saw a man wearing a black coat. 

"Hi there miss, you exactly look like my next girlfriend" he approached to you while removing his shades, revealing those familiar blue eyes. 

He then smiled at you "I miss you, babe" 
You immediately hugged him tightly and both fell on the snowy ground. 

"You idiot! Do you know how lonely I am?!" you began to cry. 

"Haha, you don't have to cry ya' know?" he lifted your chin up. "I'm here now... I promise I won't leave you again..." his face was slowly getting closer. You suddenly got impatient so you kissed him, he got shocked at first but then, kissed you back. 

"I love you babe..." he placed his palms on your cheek and rested his forehead on yours. 

"I love you more..." 
The End. :)

and I almost squealed at his line > "You look exactly my next girlfriend" XDDD
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:iconreaderchi:
readerchi Featured By Owner May 30, 2015
I freaked out because i thought some perverted old man or stalker wanted to rape her. That scared me...QAQ
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Halloweengirly Featured By Owner Jan 3, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
I was freaking out when he said that, becuse I thought it was some pervted(?) old man or one of his bosses or his boss, goons. It scared me! Meanie.
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Jimplayer Featured By Owner Mar 26, 2014  Student Artist
But it was really awesome
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:iconjimplayer:
Jimplayer Featured By Owner Mar 26, 2014  Student Artist
Aw come on...I want to see something dirty
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AnimeKitty2014 Featured By Owner Oct 29, 2014
ya im pretty sure everyone does at this point.
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NikoKarma Featured By Owner Mar 23, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Awwee cute ending^.^
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sassy3dcat Featured By Owner Mar 5, 2014
moar!!
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ashley-tisdale-fan98 Featured By Owner Jan 11, 2014  Hobbyist Interface Designer
:iconmoarplz::iconmoarplz::iconmoarplz:
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Dragons3195 Featured By Owner Jan 5, 2014
^w^ Daaaaaw!
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Thornpelt125 Featured By Owner Dec 4, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
at the line my look like my next girlfriend i thought he was some sort of kidnapper and I WAS GONNA GET KIDNAPPED!!!!!!!!
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justaregulartomato Featured By Owner Feb 15, 2014  Student Writer
Same here i was like why am i notrunning away yet?!?!
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:iconthornpelt125:
Thornpelt125 Featured By Owner Feb 15, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
yah exactly 
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justaregulartomato Featured By Owner Feb 15, 2014  Student Writer
Wh owoyldbt if a starnger said that thats. . .creepy
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:iconthornpelt125:
Thornpelt125 Featured By Owner Feb 15, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
it is... 
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:iconjustaregulartomato:
justaregulartomato Featured By Owner Feb 15, 2014  Student Writer
In my mind im like 'RUN,BITCH,RUN!'
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:iconthornpelt125:
Thornpelt125 Featured By Owner Feb 15, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
that is what I was yelling at the computer..... screaming at 'me' to "RUN GOD DAHM IT, THAT GUY IS A CREEPY KIDNAPPER NOW KICK HIM IN THE BALLS AND RUN LIKE THERE IS NO TOMORROW" 
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justaregulartomato Featured By Owner Feb 15, 2014  Student Writer
Exactly well. . .good night!
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BunnyUtonium Featured By Owner Dec 17, 2013  Student General Artist
same here
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:iconthornpelt125:
Thornpelt125 Featured By Owner Dec 17, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
YAY I'M NOT CRAZY!!!!!!!!
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saphira862 Featured By Owner Nov 25, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
♥♥♥♥♥♥♥
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13th-Program Featured By Owner Nov 15, 2013  Student General Artist
nooo!!!!! it ended! T_T it hurts T_T 
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:iconfilypawishes:
FilypaWishes Featured By Owner Sep 24, 2013
Wow,genius pick-up line Whaii!~  ^^
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Shidaria Featured By Owner Sep 8, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
When I read 'your boss' I accidentally read it 'your boobs' :iconifreakinloveitplz:
I'll shut up now :iconhomerhide-plz:
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animewolfgirl-ayame Featured By Owner Mar 29, 2014  Hobbyist
XD
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mionka96 Featured By Owner Aug 24, 2013
That pick-up line >///<
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animetion7199 Featured By Owner Aug 3, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
:iconcryforeverplz:
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4everinked Featured By Owner Jul 30, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
so sweet! i can die happy now!
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Hinatathebloom1 Featured By Owner Jul 8, 2013
Awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww so cute ^w^
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jennichan2 Featured By Owner Jul 2, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Do you know how every time I try to click on the next part, I instantly squeal at the icon and every time I scroll down to continue reading I keep getting results of the previous parts with the same icon...its hard to read when your anime crush is flashing you....with dem smexy abs
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seadweller83 Featured By Owner Jan 2, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
i know right!!!!
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Shadowwing16 Featured By Owner Jun 15, 2013
:iconsqueeeeplz: :iconitssofluffyplz:
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CaliTheAnimeLover Featured By Owner May 19, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
:iconfrenchsquealplz: really great!
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:iconnemone98:
Nemone98 Featured By Owner Feb 28, 2013  Student General Artist
It ended :iconcryforeverplz:
What am I going to spend my limited freetime now? :iconsadnessplz:
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:iconnemone98:
Nemone98 Featured By Owner Feb 28, 2013  Student General Artist
How*

...stupid brain, never working. :icondammitplz:
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:icon14pip14:
14pip14 Featured By Owner Feb 26, 2013
if you can call me a brat then i can call you a perverted ass face gil
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:iconkanakensu21:
Kanakensu21 Featured By Owner Feb 28, 2013
ohmagawd i found u :D
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POisOnOUsVaPOrs Featured By Owner Jan 27, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
*squeels in pillow* lol thats what i did in my head the whole time ive been reading this story
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selahthecool Featured By Owner Dec 26, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
ahhhhh this is soooo cute!! man i love him so much!! I think all of our crushes should read these and act like them more, then we would get our happily ever afters! whos with me?
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TheCompleteSaga Featured By Owner Mar 26, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Yes. Just yes.
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:iconselahthecool:
selahthecool Featured By Owner Mar 28, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
I know right?!
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LillyLuvItachaaaan Featured By Owner Oct 16, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
ezkhrfie I SQUEELED AT THIS XD this is the most beautyful punk!america fanfic i ever read!! :D
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Arletix Featured By Owner Oct 13, 2012
lol "You look exactly my next girlfriend" xD :iconyoudontsayplz:
wow... cute xD
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MysticKyuubi24 Featured By Owner Sep 18, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
I thought when he said, "You look exzactly like my girlfriend." it was going to be some man that worked for the company warning me to stay away from Alfred but it wasnt and I to kiss my sexy man.
If it was like that, I owuld have said, "Bitch please! I will do what I want and I love the man so I dont give a fly f**k what you think." Damn staright....hehehe, what I would do for love :P Im such a derp :mangapunksai:
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cheychey145 Featured By Owner Sep 13, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
lol on that line "You look exactly my next girlfriend" i was like "HOESHITCREEPYSTALKERDUDEGUYMAN" but then i was like "OHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH its america~! @U@ im a idiot"
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ImmaNinjaPplz Featured By Owner Sep 20, 2012
lolololololololol... We had the same reactions XD
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cheychey145 Featured By Owner Sep 20, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
XD lol yay!
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ImmaNinjaPplz Featured By Owner Sep 28, 2012
:iconhigh5plz:
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cheychey145 Featured By Owner Oct 8, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
:P
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heaven-is-lonely Featured By Owner Aug 1, 2012  Student General Artist
At first I thought, "random rapist" then I continued reading...XD
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romanolover18 Featured By Owner Jul 25, 2012
Nice loved it
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