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'She's too beautiful for being a rebel huh?' said the albino to himself, he run his hand on your soft (h/c) hair and kiss your cheek, He leaned closer and abuse your neck

           You slowly opened your eyes and your eyes widened from what's happening

              'Who is this guy!?' you wondered

        "W-what are you doing!!??" you growled

             "What do you think...?" the albino smirked

           You just realize that you're handcuffed but why in bed...!?

                 "Get this thing off!!" you cried

        "No way..." he muttered, he run his hand on your thigh and caress your thigh

             "Don't touch me!!!!!!!!"

          "You're so loud..." he bring out a gun and point it on your temple, you got scared so you shut up

             He start to remove his military jacket and his shirt underneath, you closed your eyes tightly

                He leaned forward and plant a few kisses, tears came out on your eyes.

      Then someone kicked the door open, It was the blond guy you saw

           "Learn to knock, West..." said the albino

                "What are you doing!? we're in the middle of war!" the blond growled

             "Can't help it..."

                 "Let's go..." said the blond

           "Alright..." The albino stood up from the bed and toss his military jacket on his shoulder

                 "Gilbert Beilschimdt, remember that awesome name, madel(girl)..." then he left, the blond approached to you and break the handcuffs by his own barehands

          "Sorry for his rudeness..."

              "I've never heard of a Nazist apologizing to someone...?" you said

           "Don't lump me with them would you?"

                 "All of you are the same, and thank you by the way..."

             "If i were you i wouldn't try to escape here"

                "Why not...?" you asked

           "It's not like i'm concerned...but they'll kill you without hesitation, even though you're a woman, It's better to stick with me..." said the blond, blushing a bit

                 "Do you know who am i?" you asked
   
             "You're a rebel, right?"

        You gasped "How did you know?" you asked

                  "By how you dress..."

             "How come you're not killing me?" you asked

                  "I don't hurt women..."

             "Even though i'm against at Nazism...?"

                   "Yeah..."

                 "I want you to disguise for now..."  said the blond

        "Your name?" you asked

           "Ludwig, Ludwig Beilschmidt"

                  "So, how can i do that?"

               "I'll lend you our uniform" he said

          "They can see through my disguise, i don't think it's a good idea..." you said

                 "Trust me" said Ludwig, he left for a minute and came back with a uniform in hand

         "Here..."

               "Why do you have this? I mean the skirt, the boots and the stockings...? are you a crossdresser?" you asked

        "N-no, it's from the general's woman"

            "General? you mean the weird mustache man...?"

         "Y-yeah, Wait...How did you know?" he asked

              "I'm the one who killed him, Ludwig... and you don't care right?" you asked

         "W-what!? I never knew that you kill people..."

             "Of course you do! we just met today!"

          "No, that's not what i mean..."

              "So, what...?"

         "What i mean is, you look too innocent to kill"

              "Is my look that deceiving...?" you questioned

           "Anyways, get change now, we'll stilll find a way out without them knowing"

        "Okay, and get the hell out of here"

              "You don't talk like a lady, huh?"

          "Whatever, now... leave"

(After changing)

     'It's so tight... i can't breath properly' you sighed, so you unbutton 2 buttons, slightly revealing your chest

         "Woman, you done changing?" Ludwig asked

            "Yeah"

         "I'm going to open the door" he said, when he opened the door, he look so stunned and his face is kinda' red

       "Ludwig? something wrong? did i wear something in a wrong way?" you asked then stepped forward

           "N-no, nothing..." he muttered

    "So, Do you have fever?"

         "Nothing, it's just like... uh... you know, you look beautiful on those"

             "Let's go!" you said then grab his necktie and drag him outside by his necktie

         "Hey Lud, can i remove this stupid armband? It make me feel betraying my country" you said

               "Let go of my necktie can you?"

         "Oh sorry"

            "You can't remove that, all of the soldiers here wears that"

               "But i'm not a soldier...?"

           "Yes you are"

                 "N-"

            Ludwig suddenly pushed you on the wall, crushing you by his toned chest

          "L-Lud!?"

              "Pretend to be my woman now..." he whispered on your ear

        "Alright al-" Ludwig suddenly kisses you

              "What was that for!?"

           "Let's go, the meeting's starting" he ignored you. He grabbed your hand and drag you at the meeting room

                  "Sorry we're late" said Ludwig

          "Oh, look who's here" said Gilbert, standing up from the seat and approach to you

               "W-what do you want?" you asked

           "You look hot" he said, and grab your hand, he take his seat again and made you sit above him

               "Wha-!?" you gasped

          "I'm taking commands this time" said Ludwig

                "Where is the General?" one of the officers asked

              "He got killed" Ludwig said

       "What will we do now? The Italian Mafia's forces is increasing every hour and i heard that the Chinese Mafia will join them"

             "Just shut up and let me think the plan" he take his seat and place his feet on the desk

          "Hey madel, i'm afraid i didn't still asked your name" Gilbert muttered

            "___..."

                 "___?... Suits you well"

             "Should i thank you for that?"

                  "Anyways, did West do inappopriate to you?" he asked

           "Wow, look who's talking" you said

               "Well... Sorry for that, i got carried away" he said

            "You think that i'll forgive you?"

                "Yeah, you have a crush on me right?" he smirked

          "Like hell i do, idiot"

                "Stop lying~ you're stalking me earlier with your sniper right?"

         You blushed like a tomato "I'm not stalking you, Just happened that i saw you... Before that, how did you know? i mean that i'm using a sniper?" you asked
                  

              "You're on the rooftop right? West told me that someone aiming at us, so i take a quick glance to make sure"

              "And you don't care what happened to your General?" you asked

                   "Yeah, Do you remember that he talked to us that time?"

            "Yea', what about it?"

                 "I used that time for you to kill him"

                "Why you hate him that much? even Ludwig..."

            "We also want to stop this stupid Nazism" he whispered

                  "So, why did you join?"

             "We're here to kill him"

                 "Sorry but i killed him first" you chuckled

             "Thank you for killing him for us, ___..." he whispered again and kissed your cheek

           "Who the hell told you to kiss me, huh!?" you growled

              "That's all for the meeting" said Ludwig

                     "Let's go __" said Gilbert

             "To where...?" you asked

                 "Now that West takes command, Now's the time to kill them"  
This is just an Anime fan fiction, No fascism intended
I suggest you to read this first before leaving harsh comments

Pt 1: [link]
Pt 3: [link]
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:icongab226789:
gab226789 Featured By Owner Jan 31, 2014  Student Writer
well atleast I never got raped o-o
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YukiHonda2144 Featured By Owner May 17, 2014
yet England (Evil) [V3] 
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zoethegreat8668 Featured By Owner Jun 5, 2014   General Artist
oh shit...
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gab226789 Featured By Owner May 17, 2014  Student Writer
AHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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sassy3dcat Featured By Owner Feb 17, 2014
so I'm not the only one who thought that? XD
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gab226789 Featured By Owner Feb 17, 2014  Student Writer
exactly :3
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Andi-Tiucs Featured By Owner Jan 26, 2014  Student Digital Artist
Lol "weird moustache man " :XD:
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drowninginthedarknes Featured By Owner Jul 7, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
if it were actually me... i'd let gilbert do whatever wanted
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saylila Featured By Owner Apr 5, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
Hell yeahh LETS KILL THOSE MOTHERFUCKERS!!!!!
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munchkingetya Featured By Owner Feb 17, 2013
YAY there's more!!!
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Arletix Featured By Owner Sep 24, 2012
is it just me or... What happened to Romano?!
I love this...! :D
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sleana6903 Featured By Owner Jun 16, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
it's so cute~!
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GoreyHannah2gud Featured By Owner Apr 10, 2012
Gil-san, you pervert! You should know better!
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lizzy-dark-rose Featured By Owner Apr 4, 2012  Student
This is a great story and I love so far!~ There is a lot of grammar issues however but that's no big deal.~
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0xWhaii Featured By Owner Apr 4, 2012  Student Writer
^^
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sarpndo Featured By Owner Mar 27, 2012
can't wait.
btw, i think, when addressing the people, it would just be "Nazi" not "nazist"
But, anyway, its a good story, and after reading through many of the comments, I have to say, I'm glad everything got resolved. Nazis are bad, Nazism and fascism is bad. In fact, they were evil! But, i enjoy this because it is from the inside, but the characters are obviously against nazism. (i don't know if that works...). anyway, I am not in anyway trying to hate on people or point fingers. I just want to put imy input into a very heated conversation. :) Let's be friends since, realistically, we all share the viewpoint. :icongrouphugplz:
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0xWhaii Featured By Owner Apr 4, 2012  Student Writer
I did "Nazist" on purpose XDD

Of course we can be friends~! sorry for late reply XDD i just notice this ^.^
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sarpndo Featured By Owner Apr 5, 2012
ok. :)
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AllysonStoner Featured By Owner Mar 25, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
This was wonderful!!! I luved it! I simply can't wait for the next chapter~ ^-^
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0xWhaii Featured By Owner Mar 26, 2012  Student Writer
^^
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crazycake250 Featured By Owner Mar 25, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
tee hee
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:icon0xwhaii:
0xWhaii Featured By Owner Mar 25, 2012  Student Writer
:iconenglandgiggleplz:
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crazycake250 Featured By Owner Mar 25, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
im also german so, again tee hee.
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MaiSodenoShirayuki Featured By Owner Mar 25, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Can't wait for the next chapter!
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nomheartluvs Featured By Owner Mar 25, 2012
I cannot tell you how much I enjoy reading this story~
and that picture!fffff

Great job~
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0xWhaii Featured By Owner Mar 25, 2012  Student Writer
thanks! :iconyaygermanyplz:
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xXIvyBraginskixX Featured By Owner Mar 25, 2012  Student Photographer
.... y can i read this if im under 15... i dont see anything bad in this >.> in fact im 12 and im ok reading this -.-"
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0xWhaii Featured By Owner Mar 25, 2012  Student Writer
12!? O_O
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xXIvyBraginskixX Featured By Owner Mar 25, 2012  Student Photographer
yes... 12.... is that a bad thing? >.>
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0xWhaii Featured By Owner Mar 25, 2012  Student Writer
Uhmm... you see, there's a inappropriate scene there ^^;
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xXIvyBraginskixX Featured By Owner Mar 26, 2012  Student Photographer
oh... i never noticed...
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xXIvyBraginskixX Featured By Owner Mar 26, 2012  Student Photographer
oh... i didnt notice....
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0xWhaii Featured By Owner Mar 27, 2012  Student Writer
XDDD
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xXIvyBraginskixX Featured By Owner Mar 27, 2012  Student Photographer
xDD
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PudnFan4Life Featured By Owner Mar 25, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I'm turning 16 in 7 days, I think I can get away with reading it. >w<
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0xWhaii Featured By Owner Mar 25, 2012  Student Writer
Yeah~
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dreamofredmansions Featured By Owner Mar 25, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Wait, why is the mafia in this...?
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:icon0xwhaii:
0xWhaii Featured By Owner Mar 25, 2012  Student Writer
This is not just a story for Nazis

I want to change the style so... I involved Mafias XDD
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dreamofredmansions Featured By Owner Mar 26, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
I see!
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0xWhaii Featured By Owner Mar 26, 2012  Student Writer
^^
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Sibiria-chan Featured By Owner Mar 25, 2012
sdkjfbnalfhaujfnAKEFUZB MOOOOOOAR!! pretty please??


And don't listen to the others saying that you're gloryfiyng Nazis for a bad reason. You don't, and I get your point, portraying Gil and Lud as hardworking Soldiers, trying to serve their homeland. It's just sexy.

TO HELL WITH THIS. I'm German and I know enough about Nazis and how bad they were, but please, people, stop complaining about this being a 'Nazi-gloryfying' thing. reading this and liking the style of it doesn't make me a Nazi either. I don't give any FrUKs what you think, I'm just not a Nazi.

This story...it's just a way to entertain reader who are bored of the old cheesy stuff. They want a change.

Just freaking suck it up.

Again, don't listen to them.

IF YOU DON'T WANT TO READ; DON'T!
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0xWhaii Featured By Owner Mar 25, 2012  Student Writer
Awww... :3 i love you for that >.< :iconsweethugplz:
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Sibiria-chan Featured By Owner Mar 26, 2012
No worries :)
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volunge Featured By Owner Mar 25, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Nazis. Are. Hot.
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AngryAlbatros Featured By Owner Mar 25, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
Oh!I love it!
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0xWhaii Featured By Owner Mar 25, 2012  Student Writer
Thanks~~ :iconaawplz:
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shibanarra1 Featured By Owner Mar 25, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
I would have to say using a bit more actions in your story would make it flow a bit better, you seem to be a bit dialog dependent but other than that your work is very good and I love your work so far.
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0xWhaii Featured By Owner Mar 25, 2012  Student Writer
O-okay, thanks ^^;
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shibanarra1 Featured By Owner Mar 25, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
Sorry if I sounded rude or somthing I was trying to be helpful sorry.. :iconsorryplz:
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0xWhaii Featured By Owner Mar 25, 2012  Student Writer
Oh it's nothing ^^
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