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This seriously made me have an epic nosebleed :iconmegablushplz:

So~ who's next~? comment below~
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:icondevilishly-beautiful:
Devilishly-Beautiful Featured By Owner 1 day ago
Mission Success... Oh you sneaky bastards
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:iconmara413:
Mara413 Featured By Owner 5 days ago  Student General Artist
take a deep breath.
2. think of someone you like 
3.press F10 5 times
4.send this to five other comments
5.look at your backround 
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Mara413 Featured By Owner 5 days ago  Student General Artist
DONT READ THIS. YOU WILL BE KISSED ON THE BEST DAY OF YOUR LIFE. NOW THAT YOU'VE STARTED READING, DONT STOP. THIS IS SO FREAKY. 1 say your name 10 times 2. say your mum's name 5 times and your crushes name 3 times 4. paste this onto 4 OTHER GAMES. If you do this, your crush will kiss you on the nearest Friday possible. But if you read this and do not paste this, you will get bad luck. SEND THIS ON 5 DIFFERENT GAMES IN 143 MINUTES. WHEN YOUR DONE, PRESS F6 AND YOUR CRUSHES NAME WILL APPEAR IN BIG LETTERS. THIS IS SO FREAKY IT ACTUALLY WORKSDONT READ THIS. YOU WILL BE KISSED ON THE BEST DAY OF YOUR LIFE. NOW THAT YOU'VE STARTED READING, DONT STOP. THIS IS SO FREAKY. 1 say your name 10 times 2. say your mum's name 5 times and your crushes name 3 times 4. paste this onto 4 OTHER GAMES. If you do this, your crush will kiss you on the nearest Friday possible. But if you read this and do not paste this, you will get bad luck. SEND THIS ON 5 DIFFERENT GAMES IN 143 MINUTES. WHEN YOUR DONE, PRESS F6 AND YOUR CRUSHES NAME WILL APPEAR IN BIG LETTERS. THIS IS SO FREAKY IT ACTUALLY WORKS
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Otaku4LifePASTA Featured By Owner Feb 15, 2015  New member Student Artist
OMGGG WHAT NOW? 0_0
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:iconashenkitsumi:
AshenKitsumi Featured By Owner Feb 14, 2015  New member
My reaction to forgetting his birthday-:angry:  You don't forget Lovi's birthday!
My reaction to his gift request-Hibiya Amamiya-01 (Shy Blush) [V2] Onodera Blushing Icon Tomoyo Blushing Icon Artimist - Blush / Embarrassed / Shy / Stuttering Choi Blushing Icon 
You did an awesome job mon cher~!
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SapphireSuicune83 Featured By Owner Feb 15, 2015  New member Student General Artist
my reaction as well
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:iconmoonsteia:
moonsteia Featured By Owner Feb 6, 2015  Student Filmographer
Hetalia Switzerland Nosebleed 
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:iconstridermangoes:
StriderMangoes Featured By Owner Jan 26, 2015  New member Hobbyist General Artist
That question tho... just nosebleeds everywhere xD
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DrunkOnAnime Featured By Owner Jan 22, 2015  New member Hobbyist General Artist
Nosebleed 
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:iconpuffedcandyly:
PuffedCandyly Featured By Owner Jan 19, 2015  New member
What coecidence!
The name of the character is Sophia, that my name! ( the PH too...)


Her hair is brown. Like mine!
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theotakugurl Featured By Owner Jan 19, 2015  New member Student General Artist
.......................That was fun............................. I liked it! :)
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RussiaHetaliaLove Featured By Owner Jan 16, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
DONT READ THIS. YOU WILL BE KISSED ON THE BEST DAY OF YOUR LIFE. NOW THAT YOU'VE STARTED READING, DONT STOP. THIS IS SO FREAKY. 1 say your name 10 times 2. say your mum's name 5 times and your crushes name 3 times 4. paste this onto 4 other games. If you do this, your crush will kiss you on the nearest Friday possible. But if you read this and do not paste this, you will get bad luck. SEND THIS ON 5 DIFFERENT GAMES IN 143 MINUTES. WHEN YOUR DONE, PRESS F6 AND YOUR CRUSHES NAME WILL APPEAR IN BIG LETTERS. THIS IS SO FREAKY IT ACTUALLY WORKS
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SapphireSuicune83 Featured By Owner Feb 15, 2015  New member Student General Artist
1. my significant other will kiss me when she feels like it, thank you very much.
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RussiaHetaliaLove Featured By Owner Feb 23, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
lol omg haha :D
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:iconsapphiresuicune83:
SapphireSuicune83 Featured By Owner Feb 24, 2015  New member Student General Artist
:3
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inky-graphics Featured By Owner Jan 14, 2015  Student General Artist
Hi, honestly I have to tell you, I love Hetalia (like loooove Hetalia, it's how my girlfriend and I got together) Anywho, I think you deserve an honest critique of this, and a lot of it applies to your other dating sim games. 

As far as the visuals go, using mmd is a good idea, but can be really limiting as far as outfits the characters are wearing, what characters you can include, ect. Also I would work on the little graphics and the fonts. There are a lot of fonts out there (I use Dafont.com) for free that can suit these games a little better. (as a designer I really like to use simple clean fonts for large blocks of text, it just makes it easier to read.) And just make sure that you keep the graphics clean. Like the tomato graphics you used, I would take a little more time and make sure you erase all of the white background. You should also keep the style of the fonts, graphics, and overall games the same or similar. For example the tomato you used feels more like it should go on a pizza box instead of an anime dating sim. I'm sure you can find little chibi or more anime style tomatoes to use. If you have a lot of trouble with design overall, don't be afraid to ask about collaborations. You do have some really cute ideas!

As far as the writing and characterization goes, just make sure you keep everyone in character. I read the manga and I've read through a lot of tutorials and guidelines for writing Hetalia characters and that's really helped me with my characterization. Also I've found a lot of good doujinshiis and fanfictions with great characterization and if you want, I can send you some helpful links.
Now the plot is definitely pretty cute. Even with the ending where he, well, "want's you"(I would have to say it feels a little out of character, he is flirty but that was very, well, direct.) I just think from a gaming point of view, you want to give it a little more plot. Give the player some wiggle room and agency instead of leading them directly to the preferred ending. It just feels a little forced, especially in the Hetaloid one where all of the negative options led to a "try again". Try coming up with three or four other endings with plots branching off from the different options. I've read a lot of "choose your own adventure" books, which were really the original dating sim games, and they were a lot of fun with all of the different endings and plots and such. I would just take your basic plot, and then see what you can add to it from the different options you give. 
Also, I would make sure you develop the relationship more. It felt very rushed and I knew the person I was playing had a crush on him, but I didn't know if they were dating, friends, almost strangers, and then the next thing I know, sex. Just make sure you give yourself time to build that up, weather it be romance or lust. 
Speaking of romance and lust, you definitely want to work on building up the mood for a statement like the end. The outside was nice, but maybe mention the moonlight on his skin or the look in his eyes. I would also show some of what the "you" character is feeling. Their face heating up, their heart fluttering, ect. And also, Romano is certainly flirty, and I'm sure he'd gladly take a cute boy or girl for his birthday present. But in my opinion, he would lead up to it more. Flirty looks, mentioning how cute "you" look, again, I would take a look at some more fanfictions and doujinshiis. I could also write you an edited version of that scene if you think that might be helpful. I honestly write more smut then I'd like to admit, but I really believe that the journey is better then the destination, especially when the destination isn't shown. As far as the very end goes, I think it would be more in character, and even if not in character more practical, to have them do the do outside, not to go back in and basically announce it. For the little joke at the end you could just do a "several minutes later" with them walking back in and the rest of the party saying it worked. I just think that would work a little better.

I hope you don't mind the critique, but you have some really cute ideas and you're pretty good at mmd too, there was just a lot of room for improvement in your dating sim games. You don't have to, but I think your next game will turn out really good if you keep my advice in mind. I've been in the fandom for quite a few years (I'm an adult now actually) and I see some real potential for a really good Hetalia dating sim. :)

Good luck!  
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sashachan1233 Featured By Owner Jan 11, 2015  New member Student Writer
Lovino: I'll be gentle
Friend: If you know what he mean
Me:Tomoyo Blushing Icon  s-shut up
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:iconthesinistershadow:
thesinistershadow Featured By Owner Jan 10, 2015
oh my god oh my god oh my god oh my god!!!!!!! Ai Fuyuumi (Blush) [V1] Marry Kozakura (Total Blush) [V9] Anime Msn Emotion 2 RP Face: Super blush Onodera Blushing Icon Seal Icon Artimist - Blush / Embarrassed / Shy / Stuttering 
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xDuckyDuckx Featured By Owner Jan 10, 2015
SOMEONE OPEN THE ROOM I WANT TO RUN, NAKED OR NOT XD
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Ackoh13 Featured By Owner Jan 8, 2015  Student Writer
Marry Kozakura (Total Blush) [V9] Kaori Fujimiya (Total Shyness) [V1] Anime Msn Emotion 2 Kaori Fujimiya (Total Blush) [V1] Hibiya Amamiya-01 (Shy Blush) [V2] Ai Fuyuumi (Blush) [V1] 
 OMG OMG OMG OMG
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MustacheDuctTape Featured By Owner Jan 6, 2015  New member Student General Artist
What is the ending song?
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sashachan1233 Featured By Owner Jan 11, 2015  New member Student Writer
spice by len kagmine
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MustacheDuctTape Featured By Owner Jan 11, 2015  New member Student General Artist
Thanks!
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MustacheDuctTape Featured By Owner Jan 6, 2015  New member Student General Artist
My face at the end: :blueshocked: OH MY SNAPPLE!!! SQUEAAAAAAAAAALLLLLLLLLLLLLOnodera Blushing Icon Shouta Kazehaya (Blushing all over) [V1]  Fool Emoji-14 (Pervy Crazy Dance) [V1] Cheshire Hump omg 
Romano (Shoo-shoo) [V4] Romano (Curse) [V2] Romano Mocks [V2] Romano (Mustache Laughs) [V1] Romano (Mad while holding a tomato) [V4] Romano (Cries) [V4] Italy and Romano [V1] ROMANO.... .....YOU. 
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LightEmeraldTimeborn Featured By Owner Jan 3, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
O_O Oh My Pineapple! -gets a massive nosebleed- What. The. Hell. I bet this was all Frances idea.....
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marshmellowcats Featured By Owner Jan 3, 2015  Student Artist
me: seems cool
*goes outside*
me: coo- romano?!
romano: how about giving yourself to me?
supernosebleed emoticon :nosebleed: Freddy Nosebleed 
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KimiVargas1314 Featured By Owner Jan 2, 2015  Hobbyist Writer
DONT READ THIS. YOU WILL BE KISSED ON THE BEST DAY OF YOUR LIFE. NOW THAT YOU'VE STARTED READING, DONT STOP. THIS IS SO FREAKY. 1 say your name 10 times 2. say your mum's name 5 times and your crushes name 3 times 4. paste this onto 4 other games. If you do this, your crush will kiss you on the nearest Friday possible. But if you read this and do not paste this, you will get bad luck. SEND THIS ON 5 DIFFERENT GAMES IN 143 MINUTES. WHEN YOUR DONE, PRESS F6 AND YOUR CRUSHES NAME WILL APPEAR IN BIG LETTERS. THIS IS SO FREAKY IT ACTUALLY WORKS
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ProteoValdez Featured By Owner Jan 2, 2015
take a deep breath.
2. think of someone you like 
3.press F10 5 times
4.send this to five other comments
5.look at your backround
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ProteoValdez Featured By Owner Jan 2, 2015
DONT READ THIS. YOU WILL BE KISSED ON THE BEST DAY OF YOUR LIFE. NOW THAT YOU'VE STARTED READING, DONT STOP. THIS IS SO FREAKY. 1 say your name 10 times 2. say your mum's name 5 times and your crushes name 3 times 4. paste this onto 4 other games. If you do this, your crush will kiss you on the nearest Friday possible. But if you read this and do not paste this, you will get bad luck. SEND THIS ON 5 DIFFERENT GAMES IN 143 MINUTES. WHEN YOUR DONE, PRESS F6 AND YOUR CRUSHES NAME WILL APPEAR IN BIG LETTERS. THIS IS SO FREAKY IT ACTUALLY WORKS
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MSxmusicgirl Featured By Owner Jan 2, 2015  Hobbyist Artist
Romano/Lovino: How about giving yourself to me?
Me:....Ai Fuyuumi (Blush) [V1] *Picked "It's just only one night right...?"* Kaori Fujimiya (Total Blush) [V1] 
Romano: I'll be gentle.
Me: Onodera Blushing Icon ...I think I know what he meant by "I'll be gentle"....BlushyRitsu *fangirling for 5 minutes* 


THANK YOU FOR MAKING THIS!!!!!! *internet hugging you*  Yato and Hiyori (Snuggy) [V1] 
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Emzie-Chan Featured By Owner Jan 2, 2015
But volleyball is mah fave sport!! It's even more awesome than ''Ze Awesome Prussia'' himself!
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Moeki-Hyshiko Featured By Owner Jan 1, 2015
I stared at female Germany's boobs the whole time.
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KorbynLuvsTheHaters Featured By Owner Jan 1, 2015  Student Digital Artist
I had..the biggest...perverted smile at the end..no joke.Niky Purple Devil Pervert Ohhh youuu! Perverted Fallen Ray meme (pervert face) Blitz Wolf devil 
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skull-candy-fangirl Featured By Owner Dec 30, 2014  New member
Reaction to the ending: Icon - 019 Oliver (Nosebleed) Omfg!! APH England: Scared 
My friend's reaction: Hopefully he's used to being bottomPerverted Fallen Blitz Wolf devil  if you know what I mean 
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torr12 Featured By Owner Dec 29, 2014
Take a deep breath.·
· 2. Think of someone you like.·
· 3. Press F10 5 times.·
· 4. Send this to 5 comments....·
· 5. Look at your background
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:iconhatsunejanako:
hatsunejanako Featured By Owner Dec 28, 2014  Student Artist
me:WHAAA? (Momoka) Emote Aura nosebleed plz 
(gets startled by the music ending) 
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:iconderpy-bubbles164:
Romano:I'll be gentle
Me:Icon - 019 Oliver (Nosebleed) Nosebleedfall Emoticon: Nosebleed
WHAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAATTTTTTTt?!?!?!??!



AND YDAFAHK WAS ''THEIR MINDS" SAYING MISSON SUCCESSHetalia Switzerland Nosebleed Hetalia Switzerland Nosebleed Hetalia Switzerland Nosebleed


AND LEN KAGAMINE SPICEMangle nosebleed Mangle nosebleed Mangle nosebleed I AM DEAD.
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HIKAORU-FUJIOKA Featured By Owner Dec 19, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Romano: I'll be gentle
Me: *nosebleed unleashed*
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TheSuperNarwhal Featured By Owner Dec 18, 2014  Student General Artist
OMG you made me have a frikin fangirl attack!

"How about you give yourself to me ;)

Me: fangirl  I AM OKAY WITH THIS, I AM SO FUCKING OKAY WITH THIS! I WILL REGRET NOTHING OF MY DECISION! Spazzing Mir 

"I'll be gentle ;)"

Me: Exo : Kai Happiness OH MY FUCKING FRECKLED JESUS Party Hard and Spazzing Joon  I AM NOT FUCKING OKAY! YESS LOVI YAAAAAAAS LOVI! I AM OKAY WITH THIS!PervyMoni 
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thedemidod Featured By Owner Dec 10, 2014
Lol, their minds:mission success! 
I got a nosebleed!!! XD
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Misaki55 Featured By Owner Dec 7, 2014
Love-chain runnig for riling yayyyyyyyyyy Fangirl Emote 
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:iconroxyrouge187:
RoxyRouge187 Featured By Owner Nov 27, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
dat tie is so random~ Pikachu-lol 
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RoxyRouge187 Featured By Owner Nov 26, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
PervyMoni Icon - 019 Oliver (Nosebleed) Nosebleed 
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izalikesilver Featured By Owner Nov 26, 2014
Why is there never a fem china😢😢😢😐
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Abby760 Featured By Owner Nov 18, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Cheshire Hump omg 
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superlooperlexi Featured By Owner Nov 16, 2014  Student Writer
Crazy Homer OMG Spaz attack Hand spaz plz Kofuku Ebisu (Fangirling) [V1] 
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Gemany113 Featured By Owner Nov 12, 2014  Hobbyist Artisan Crafter
DONT READ THIS. YOU WILL BE KISSED ON THE BEST DAY OF YOUR LIFE. NOW THAT YOU'VE STARTED READING, DONT STOP. THIS IS SO FREAKY. 1 say your name 10 times 2. say your mum's name 5 times and your crushes name 3 times 4. paste this onto 4 other games. If you do this, your crush will kiss you on the nearest Friday possible. But if you read this and do not paste this, you will get bad luck. SEND THIS ON 5 DIFFERENT GAMES IN 143 MINUTES. WHEN YOUR DONE, PRESS F6 AND YOUR CRUSHES NAME WILL APPEAR IN BIG LETTERS. THIS IS SO FREAKY IT ACTUALLY WORKS
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Rasberry24 Featured By Owner Nov 12, 2014
DONT READ THIS. YOU WILL BE KISSED ON THE BEST DAY OF YOUR LIFE. NOW THAT YOU'VE STARTED READING, DONT STOP. THIS IS SO FREAKY. 1 say your name 10 times 2. say your mum's name 5 times and your crushes name 3 times 4. paste this onto 4 other games. If you do this, your crush will kiss you on the nearest Friday possible. But if you read this and do not paste this, you will get bad luck. SEND THIS ON 5 DIFFERENT GAMES IN 143 MINUTES. WHEN YOUR DONE, PRESS F6 AND YOUR CRUSHES NAME WILL APPEAR IN BIG LETTERS. THIS IS SO FREAKY IT ACTUALLY WORKS
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